Every breath that you breathe is a lie,
I just wanna suffocate you, til the words die
They’ll bleed the pain you never felt
Breathing down down down your nervous neck
They’ll circle around your stone black heart
Up to your eyes that only see dark.
And as the words rot away,
To live with the dead that never stayed,
You’ll stare at the noose that made you rue
The dreaded lie- I love you.
Title rights go to Miss Chloe Keedy, as for the poem: I wrote it; it's really scary I know but i'm working with a lot of emotions here...it's hard to keep them all confined into little G-Rated kinder garden rants so sorry for sounding totally crazy. BUT if you actually liked this I recommend Edgar Allen Poe...he's awesome...very dark but AWESOME and his poems are WAY darker than this one; for him this is a G-Rated Kinder Garden rant.
Well have a nice day and don't be afraid to shed emotions; no matter how creepy they may appear.
It is very creepy...
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Hahah, because I'm sadistic, apparently...
Maybe your writing will encourage me to actually do something when I get on the computer, other than checking my photostream to see if anyone has commented, which they have not because I FAIL.
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5 or for you, 6 periods.
And then we are officially on weekend. (:
Now that, is something to smile about.
lol I love you
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